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The graph opposite shows the destination of New Zealand's goods exports between 1973 and 2002. Summaries te information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph opposite shows the destination of New Zealand's goods exports between 1973 and 2002. Summaries te information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the information about destiny export
stuffs
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stuff
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 of New Zealand in the period between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that all these countries experience different terms.
Rest
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The rest
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 of
World
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the World
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 and the UK show the biggest change during
this
 time frame.
While
 the figures for Japan,
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the US
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 and Australia show several
fluctuation
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. The total merchandise in the Rest of
World
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the World
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 showed a significant increase. It began to account for about 38 in 1973 to 49 in 2002.
However
,
in
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 1983 until 1992 it remained stable at 48 stuffs.
While
 the UK had a big change between 1973 and 2002, which is in 1973 the total
sell
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 abroad was
plumet
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plummet
 from 37 things to approximately 5 goods. The export in Japan was almost steady in 1973 it was 11.
However
, it was constant
in
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 1983 to 1992 about 12 and a small drop to 11.
While
,
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 Australia shows the total export started at 15 in 1973 and finished at 29 with some inconsistent.
Also
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 it happen in
US
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the US
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 that the transport began at approximately 14 to around 12 in 2002 with some trend.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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