The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
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The chart depicts the average percentage of how
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
sugar
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can be hazardous for health if
it
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consumed too much in everyday meals in the USA. The first chart shows the percentage of
sodium
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in everyday meals. 14% of
sodium
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is consumed in
the
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breakfast
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and in snacks. At
lunch
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, 29% of
sodium
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is eaten and 43% at
dinner
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. The second chart illustrates
on
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the amount of saturated fat
is
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consumed by an individual. At
breakfast
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, the individual
has
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consumed 16% of saturated fat and during
lunch
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26%. By the snack ,time the person had eaten 21% of saturated fat and 37% in
dinner
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. The third and
last
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charts represent added
carbohydrate
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in the food. Only 16% of
sugar
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is consumed in the
breakfast
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which is the least in all the meals. After that, 19% of added
sugar
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is found in
lunch
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. The most amount of
sugar
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is found in the snack time and 23% of added
sugar
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is in the
dinner
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. In conclusion,
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
sugar
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is
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are
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least
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the least
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found in
breakfast
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.
Sodium
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and saturated
sugar
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found in the
lunch
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is too much and added
sugar
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is a little less than that. At
dinner
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, the amount of
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
sugar
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is fluctuating.
Sodium
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in the snacks is still a little
les
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less
compared to the other two which are saturated fat and added
sugar
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.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, lunch, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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