The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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The chart depicts the average percentage of how

sodium

, saturated fat and added

sugar

can be hazardous for health if

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consumed too much in everyday meals in the USA. The first chart shows the percentage of

sodium

in everyday meals. 14% of

sodium

is consumed in

the

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breakfast

and in snacks. At

lunch

, 29% of

sodium

is eaten and 43% at

dinner

. The second chart illustrates

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the amount of saturated fat

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consumed by an individual. At

breakfast

, the individual

has

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consumed 16% of saturated fat and during

lunch

26%. By the snack ,time the person had eaten 21% of saturated fat and 37% in

dinner

. The third and

last

charts represent added

carbohydrate

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in the food. Only 16% of

sugar

is consumed in the

breakfast

which is the least in all the meals. After that, 19% of added

sugar

is found in

lunch

. The most amount of

sugar

is found in the snack time and 23% of added

sugar

is in the

dinner

. In conclusion,

sodium

, saturated fat and added

sugar

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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least

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the least

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found in

breakfast

Sodium

and saturated

sugar

found in the

lunch

is too much and added

sugar

is a little less than that. At

dinner

, the amount of

sodium

, saturated fat and added

sugar

is fluctuating.

Sodium

in the snacks is still a little

les

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less

compared to the other two which are saturated fat and added

sugar

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