The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The presented chart describes the comparison of 31% in
restaurant
-going Use synonyms
people
who were habituated to eating Use synonyms
food
outside of the home between 2003 and 2013.
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Overall
, in the Linking Words
year
,2003 every day only 4.5% Use synonyms
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people
went for fast Change preposition
of people
food
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However
, in the Linking Words
year
2006 and Use synonyms
also
in the Linking Words
year
2013 the Use synonyms
rate
decreased to 3%.
Here come the Use synonyms
people
who were in the Use synonyms
restaurant
several times a week. In 2003 17% of Use synonyms
people
ate outside Use synonyms
food
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Whereas
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this
percentage Linking Words
was
fell by 2.5% in the Unnecessary verb
apply
year
2013.
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In addition
, once a week those who had Linking Words
restaurant
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food
in the Use synonyms
year
2013Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
were
rate
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
rate
increased by 2% in 2006 and down to 27% by 2013.
More, the number of Use synonyms
people
who were in the Use synonyms
restaurant
once or twice a month in the Use synonyms
year
2003 Use synonyms
were
30%. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Although
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this
Linking Words
rate
has downward in the Use synonyms
year
2006 and rise again in the Use synonyms
year
2013 by 8%.
A few times in a Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
people
who went for outside Use synonyms
food
in the Use synonyms
year
2003 the percentage was 12.5% and it increased to 15% by 2006 and remain content till 2013.
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Finally
, for those who had never been to a Linking Words
restaurant
in the Use synonyms
year
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2003
the Add a comma
,2003
rate
was 5% and decreased by 1% in the Use synonyms
year
2006 and remain the same in the Use synonyms
year
2013.Use synonyms
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