You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am John, a Student of B.sc in hospitality currently pursuing my final year in the college. I am writing to express my annoyance with my roommate with whom I am staying. In fact, my roommate Steven is smoking in the room which is not allowed to,
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he is partying with his friends and drinking alcoholic beverages. ,
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he is playing loud music which makes me sleep disturbed.
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I am not able to concentrate on my studies, something he uses my personal things without permission. I would request you to change my room with another person so that I can concertante on my studies. Exams are
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near so if could you do them as earliest as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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