Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand Humans life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Do we need to learn anything from
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time or not?
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topic has been a hot discussion. some people will think that history will teach us someone
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other people will disagree
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that. today I will talk to you about both of my
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. Today in
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generation, do you think
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a century
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or decade will help us today?
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we are in the 21st century where we
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specialises
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technology or science.
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however
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i
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agree that currently history
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give us a little help and
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us understand our technology
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through
our past times.
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, the olden days will help us from mistakes like certain events like
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1 and 2 that we escaped
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three as we know how scary bombs are. without our past, we are nothing
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, I agree that we need to learn anything
history
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about history
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it will help and gain us knowledge on how to shape our tomorrow, a better life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable source of information
  • human behavior
  • governance
  • social structures
  • cultural heritage
  • historical awareness
  • modern society
  • technological advancements
  • medical advancements
  • economic patterns
  • financial decisions
  • historical conflicts
  • contemporary situations
  • rapid technological changes
  • relevant
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