The diagrams illustrate some changes and planned development in the BRIGHTSEA along the coastal zone.

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These three maps depict modifications done at the coastal zone of Brightsea from 1950 until today, and the

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development plans.

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, the development plan of the coast illustrates

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facilities than it were in 1950.

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, the jetty and the lighthouse are the only places which keep their initial position. Looking more closely, over a period of 50 years which began in 1950 a new road was built on the east side of the map.

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, the lighthouse

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house was demolished and replaced with a hotel. On the side covered by water, a new construction it can be noticed which is called

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a ferry

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wharf. On developing

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the plan

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, an extension will be added to the main hotel and a sailing club will be constructed next to it. In the northeast corner is planned a residential area with a restaurant and apartments

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in shop place will be car parks

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and a huge supermarket.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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The diagrams illustrate some changes and planned development in the BRIGHTSEA along the coastal zone.

Advantages and disadvantages of watching horror movies.

Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In many countries, workers over 60 can still be found in the workplace. However, some people think that this may cause social problems and they should be retired. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.