The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams show a study result of the main goal for individuals aged 20 to 50 years old in exercising and where they do them. In general, most
of
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the
people are keen to Correct article usage
apply
exercise
because of the recreational and leisure aspect. Meanwhile
the most preferred place to do the Add a comma
,Meanwhile
exercise
is the private gym facilities.
Almost half of the participants chose recreational
aspect as the goal for their Correct article usage
the recreational
exercise
activity with forty percent
of the share. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, three of the following aims that consist of muscle toning, weightloss
, and disease prevention are closely related in the context of health-oriented goals which show that both leisure and health Correct your spelling
weight loss
aspect
are both important for someone to give them the motivation and goal to Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
exercise
.
More than a third of the adults at the rate of 35 percent
prefer to Change the spelling
per cent
exercise
at the gyms while
the rest tend to exercise
in public sports venues, parks, playgrounds, or other public spaces where each of
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chosen by around 15 to 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
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