The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams show a study result of the main goal for individuals aged 20 to 50 years old in exercising and where they do them. In general, most

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the

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people are keen to

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because of the recreational and leisure aspect.

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the most preferred place to do the

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is the private gym facilities. Almost half of the participants chose

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the recreational

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aspect as the goal for their

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activity with forty

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of the share.

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, three of the following aims that consist of muscle toning,

weightloss

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, and disease prevention are closely related in the context of health-oriented goals which show that both leisure and health

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are both important for someone to give them the motivation and goal to

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. More than a third of the adults at the rate of 35

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prefer to

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at the gyms

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the rest tend to

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in public sports venues, parks, playgrounds, or other public spaces where each

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spot

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are

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chosen by around 15 to 20

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of participants.