In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

When buying a new
house
or a flat in a building, one of the initial
question
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that comes up is: who had lived in that
place
.
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Even if you forgot
asking
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any
such
questions in the
begining
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beginning
, when planning to sell the property people frequently ask about
previous
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history
of the
house
and all the residents ever lived in it.
This
could be because of
the
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curiosity. Whether a prominent person had ever shared the
place
or it could be
a
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anxiousness driven by fear; if any mishappening had
occured
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occurred
at the
place
. When purchasing or selling a
house
,
history
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of all previous owners is of profound interest. Feeling like curiosity or fear
drive
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such
a question.
For instance
, whether a crime had ever happened at the
house
or in the building, or
any
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illegal activity was performed the
the
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residence.
Also
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curiosity to know if a famous person had lived in that
place
.
Such
questions will impact the sale of the property and it can go either
ways
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, based on the
history
of
type
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of people
lived
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there. To gain knowledge on
such
a topic, a realtor is the first best person to ask before buying the
place
. And later, neighbours are the
one
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who could help you out
discoverying
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discovering
the facts and the
history
of the
house
. If you are still not satisfied, you can approach the government body dealing
in
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the
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housing management. They have all the records of all the previous owners. Or if you are living in a building, there must be a management company. Ask them any reasonable question regarding the past of that building. In conclusion, I would say feelings like fear and
curiousity
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curiosity
leads
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to questions
on
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the
history
of the
house
. A realtor, neighbours and management companies can assist in attaining
such
a information
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information
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.
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  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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