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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to read and write is more important today than in the past.

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 we can't do
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 to read and write is very compulsory
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people
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 and how can they understand other
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language
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 and
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 in now a day read write
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necessity
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 ability. In the past world is not very
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 agriculture.In the past
people
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 read and write is nesseccery.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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