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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today

#technology #world
Technologytechnology
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Technology technology
 is a concept most important around the
world
. It can solve most of our problems and questions.
However
, when talking about the
environment
 is complicated to say that it will solve the problems the
world
 face today. In my ,
oppinion
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opinion
technology
 may be the cause of all the large issues found
together with
 human effort. First and foremost, our planet is in danger. Wherever you go, you can see some places needing some kind of help around the
environment
. Deforestation is one of the common things found anywhere. In
this
 case, the
technology
 participates whit strong machines, which help to do the job quickly, became a problem and not a solution. At the same ,time industries found solutions to them with
technology
 and the
world
 become more sadder to live.
Secondly
, at the same time, I think would be useful to make machines to help the
environment
 and pollution.
Unfortunately
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 we do not see
this
 around the
world
, ideas about solutions for deforestation, gases and pollution in rivers. More and more, we need to buy water to drink. In the past I remember being possible you have water to drink from the fountains, rivers and faucets. Nowadays, is very difficult you see that, become almost impossible. In conclusion,
technology
 is strong,
helps
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and helps
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 a lot and nowadays is impossible to live without it.
However
, the
world
 is suffering from a lot of issues and the
environment
 is becoming weak. I do not know what our place is going to be next year.
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