The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
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The diagram illustrates the transformation of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
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, houses and farmland which existed in the west have been replaced by other facilities for parking, science learning and sport.
According to
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the maps of 1950 and 1980, a major construction occurred in half of the
place
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in the west.
To begin
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with, in 1950, the school occupied only half of the
place
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in the East with the school in the North and the playground in the South.
However
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, the farmland and houses located in the East were destroyed to build a car parking area and a science block in the North and a sports
field
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in the South.
In addition
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, there were no significant changes taking
place
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in the Eastern half. With respect to the pictures of 1950 and 1980, there was an extension of the parking area
while
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the size of the sports
field
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shrank. The parking for vehicles increased dramatically as they occupied the entire
place
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of the sports
field
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.
Furthermore
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, a new
field
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for exercise was constructed in
place
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of the playground in the East.
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