The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The diagram illustrates the transformation of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, houses and farmland which existed in the west have been replaced by other facilities for parking, science learning and sport.
According to
the maps of 1950 and 1980, a major construction occurred in half of the
place
in the west.
To begin
with, in 1950, the school occupied only half of the
place
in the East with the school in the North and the playground in the South.
However
, the farmland and houses located in the East were destroyed to build a car parking area and a science block in the North and a sports
field
in the South.
In addition
, there were no significant changes taking
place
in the Eastern half. With respect to the pictures of 1950 and 1980, there was an extension of the parking area
while
the size of the sports
field
shrank. The parking for vehicles increased dramatically as they occupied the entire
place
of the sports
field
.
Furthermore
, a new
field
for exercise was constructed in
place
of the playground in the East.
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