The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The chart demonstrates what
Anthropology
graduates
from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table indicates the salaries of the anthropologists in work
after 5 years.
As we can see from the pie chart, majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
Anthropology
graduates
are employed. Fifty-two per cent
of them have a full-time job. Almost twenty per cent
of graduates
have either a
part-time Remove the article
apply
work
or it is combined with post grad
study. Eight per Add a hyphen
post-grad
cent
of students continue their full-time education. Only twelve per cent
of graduates
are unemployed. The information about all the rest graduates
is unknown.
Thus
, most of
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apply
Anthropology
graduates
have a job. Half of those who work
in Government
sector earn more than a hundred Correct article usage
the Government
thousand
dollars
. It is less than proportion
of freelance concultantants who get the same amount of money. Add an article
the proportion
Besides
, it is only one-third of those who work
for private companies. We can see nearly the same percentage of those who get from fifty thousand
dollars
to ninty-nine
Correct your spelling
ninety-nine
thousand
dollars
as freelance consultants and in government
sector. The situation is different in private companies. More of them get from fifty Correct article usage
the government
thousand
to seventy-four thousand
dollars
than from seventy-five to ninety-nine thousand
dollars
. The proportion of those who work
for private companies for
from twenty-five Change preposition
apply
thousand
to forty-nine thousand
dollars
is half bigger than the same one in government
sector and as freelancers.
So, the chart and the table show us that most Add an article
the government
of
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apply
Anthropology
graduates
are employed and a
salary Add a missing verb
have a
more
than twenty-five Change preposition
of more
thousand
dollars
after five year's work
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