Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In academic subjects, have myriad reasons to support their view.
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modern era,educating children has become the most prominent priority of parents ,especially Linking Words
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competition is increasing day by day. A few individuals argue that children must attend other academic programs in their spare Linking Words
time
.Some oppose it saying that going for other activities adds extra burden to them.
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to join
additional activities exceptChange the verb form
joining
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for
Firstly
, participating in extra curriculum activities utilizes kids' Linking Words
time
, where they can learn and enjoy. Use synonyms
For example
, joining music classes, give them an opportunity to learn a new skill with having enjoyment. Linking Words
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time
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as computer games in their free period, they can use free it to polish their other traits,like communication skills . These projects will benefit them in future.
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On the contrary
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view because they believe that spending free Linking Words
time
on educational programs leads to stress and anxiety in students. Playing games with friends or watching television makes them relax after long school hours. Some students feel tired after school, Use synonyms
therefore
sending them to attend other educational sessions makes them uncomfortable or can effects their academic reports.Linking Words
Furthermore
, Childhood is a very crucial part of life and needs extra care. Linking Words
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, pushing kids to join additional programs,Linking Words
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cause serious mental stress.
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To sum up
, In my opinion, choosing extra classes is not a bad idea if one can handle it wisely. With growing competition gaining extra knowledge is very important. Students can join classes that match their interests to make it enjoyable and avoid stress.Linking Words
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