A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the investment your company is planning to make in the Yorkville
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. As a Yorkville resident, I very much appreciate that you are willing to listen to the residents' opinions in
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regard. Our local children’s soccer
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, Little Tigers, have been practising and playing matches at the Bridgewell Public Park as there is no dedicated space for them. They have been attending local soccer tournaments but lacking a proper practising field has been an obstacle to their success. On the one hand, if you decide to fund the club, coach Blake would have enough budget to rent the private football yard which is located right behind the Yorkville High School. And the
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would get higher scores in the tournaments.
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, having concerts in the neighbourhood would contribute to the local economy. The stores in
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have been financially struggling
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high rents. Our neighbourhood is not a popular
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but concerts would attract many people to the
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. The local shop owners would benefit from the concert crowd.
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, I think you should assist the Little Tigers soccer
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because if the
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can practice on a proper football field and be selected to join the provincial tournaments, the
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would eventually become popular. Yours faithfully, Gozde Ersoz
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  • sportsmanship
  • fosters
  • cultivates
  • talents
  • accessible
  • cultural entertainment
  • boosts
  • tourism
  • temporary employment opportunities
  • patron of the arts
  • community engagement
  • long-term impact
  • economic benefits
  • alternating support
  • maximize community impact
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