The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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, protein and fat in three different diets, namely an average
diet
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, a healthy
diet
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, and a healthy
diet
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for sport. It is noticeable that sportspeople require a
diet
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comprising a significantly higher
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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than an average
diet
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or a healthy
diet
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. The average
diet
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contains the
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lowest percentage of
carbohydrates
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but the highest
proportion
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of protein.
Carbohydrates
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make up 60% of a healthy
diet
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for sport.
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is 10% higher than the the
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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in a normal healthy
diet
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, and 20% more than the
proportion
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in an average
diet
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.
On the other hand
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, people who eat an average
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consume a greater
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relative amount of protein (40%) than those who eat a healthy
diet
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(30%) and sportspeople (25%). The third compound shown in the charts is fat. Fat constitutes exactly one-fifth of both the average
diet
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and the healthy
diet
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, but the figure drops to only 15% for the healthy sports
diet
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.
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