The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
proportion
of carbohydrates
, protein and fat in three different diets, namely an average diet
, a healthy diet
, and a healthy diet
for sport. It is noticeable that sportspeople require a diet
comprising a significantly higher proportion
of carbohydrates
than an average diet
or a healthy diet
. The average diet
contains the the
lowest percentage of Remove the redundancy
apply
carbohydrates
but the highest proportion
of protein. Carbohydrates
make up 60% of a healthy diet
for sport. This
is 10% higher than the the proportion
of carbohydrates
in a normal healthy diet
, and 20% more than the proportion
in an average diet
. On the other hand
, people who eat an average diet
consume a greater the
relative amount of protein (40%) than those who eat a healthy Correct article usage
apply
diet
(30%) and sportspeople (25%). The third compound shown in the charts is fat. Fat constitutes exactly one-fifth of both the average diet
and the healthy diet
, but the figure drops to only 15% for the healthy sports diet
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