The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram presents the comparison of what youth aged from 5 to 12 years old in 1990 and 2010 used as their transportation method to go to
school
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. The data are presented in the frequency of the
transport
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modes
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that are used which include walking, riding a bicycle, car,
bus
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, and the combination of riding a
bus
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and walking. In general, a change in the mainly used
transport
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modes
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can be seen in the different periods of time.
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children in 1990 preferred walking to
school
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with the data adding up to approximately 12
million
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trips
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, going to
school
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by riding a car has taken the lead by rising up to 11
million
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trips
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being the leading
transport
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mode in 2010.
In addition
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,
while
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the car shows a rise in the number of
trips
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in 2010, the other
modes
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do not show a similar result.
This
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can be seen in the trip frequency comparison between the period of 1990 and 2010, all other
modes
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' frequency of
trips
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is declining.
Transport
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methods
such
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as cycling and walking are the
modes
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that decline the most with half the number of
trips
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in 2010 compared to 1990 with the sum of 6
million
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and 2
million
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trips
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. Meanwhile, going to
school
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by walking and taking a
bus
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and only taking a
bus
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also
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experience a downward trend in a less drastic manner. The number of each
bus
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-related mode reduced at the rate of 6 to 3
million
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and 7 to 5
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, transport, modes, bus, million, trips with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trips
  • children
  • modes of transport
  • walk
  • cycle
  • public transport
  • drive
  • car
  • trends
  • decrease
  • increase
  • shift
  • convenient
  • comfortable
  • commuting
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • significant
  • indicate
  • reasons
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • 20-year period
  • doubled
  • considerable margin
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