The Diagram below describes the Water cycle and how water is used in Australia. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are inter-related

The Diagram below describes the Water cycle and how water is used in Australia. 

Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are inter-related
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The diagram illustrates the natural
water
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cycle and shows how
water
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is harnessed and
then
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used for urban purposes in a
tyoical
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typical
Australian city.
Initially
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, the sun heats the Earth, causing extensive evaporation of surface
water
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and transpiration from the
sufraces
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surfaces
surface
of plants and trees.
This
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is best illustrated by the
avaporation
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evaporation
of
water
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from the surface of a lake behind a dam which produces steam. The steam
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rises into the atmosphere, and after cooling, forms clouds. The wind causes the clouds to gather
to
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the mountains and higher areas above the dam, where it starts to rain. The rain causes rivers and streams
flow
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to flow
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down the mountains into the lake where the
water
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is stored. The
water
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stored in the lake is
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pupmed
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pumped
to a
water
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filteration
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filtration
plants
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near the town, after being filtered, is sent into another pumping station where it is pumped into a temporary reservoir before being used by the community. The community's
waste
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wastewater
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water
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is
then
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collected and sent to a wastewater treatment plant where the biosolids are separated.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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