The Diagram below describes the Water cycle and how water is used in Australia. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are inter-related
The diagram illustrates the natural
water
cycle and shows how Use synonyms
water
is harnessed and Use synonyms
then
used for urban purposes in a Linking Words
tyoical
Australian city.
Correct your spelling
typical
Initially
, the sun heats the Earth, causing extensive evaporation of surface Linking Words
water
and transpiration from the Use synonyms
sufraces
of plants and trees.Correct your spelling
surfaces
surface
This
is best illustrated by the Linking Words
avaporation
of Correct your spelling
evaporation
water
from the surface of a lake behind a dam which produces steam. The steam Use synonyms
then
rises into the atmosphere, and after cooling, forms clouds. The wind causes the clouds to gather Linking Words
to
the mountains and higher areas above the dam, where it starts to rain. The rain causes rivers and streams Change preposition
in
flow
down the mountains into the lake where the Fix the infinitive
to flow
water
is stored.
The Use synonyms
water
stored in the lake is Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
pupmed
to a Correct your spelling
pumped
water
Use synonyms
filteration
Correct your spelling
filtration
plants
near the town, after being filtered, is sent into another pumping station where it is pumped into a temporary reservoir before being used by the community.
The community's Fix the agreement mistake
plant
waste
Correct your spelling
wastewater
water
is Use synonyms
then
collected and sent to a wastewater treatment plant where the biosolids are separated.Linking Words
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