The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart compares the amount of
time
each day that people from four different countries spent doing activities were
going to the Unnecessary verb
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beach
, visiting different attractions, and reading while
on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, eight hours
per day, the Chinese
tourists
were the ones who read books the longest. The Brazilians, on the other hand
, were at the beach
for the longest of six hours
.
Chinese
visitors read books for a median of eight hours
a day, while
Brazilian and Turkish tourists
read books for an average of four hours
. Brazilian tourists
visited the beach
for the longest length of time
for six hours
while
Chinese
tourists
visited the beach
for the shortest period of time
for three hours
, or twice as long as Brazilian tourists
. Turkish visitors and Americans spent approximately the same amount of time
at the beach
for four and five hours
, respectively. Chinese
travelers spent the least amount of time
visiting locations, just one hour while
American and Turkish tourists
both spent three hours
there.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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