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The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of
Australia
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Australian
residents
who buy coffee
and tea and also
their drinking habits.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that going to a coffee
for drinking coffee
and tea in the last
month is the most popular drinking habits
in five different cities in Australia, except for Adelaide. Fix the agreement mistake
habit
In contrast
, the least percentage of drinking habit
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habits
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coffee
.
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Sydney
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coffee
at 43%. Meanwhile, Brisbane and Adelide
have the same percentage of Correct your spelling
Adelaide
residents
who buy fresh coffe
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coffee
Furthermore
, purchasing instant coffee
is the second popular
drinking habit in Australia, Correct quantifier usage
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in
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between
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residents
where Brisbane is Change preposition
of residents
highest
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the highest
for
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in
this
category.
Among the three drinking habits, buying a
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coffee
and tea in the cafe is the most popular. Hobart and Melbourne have the highest proportion of their residents
to
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in
this
category at approximately 63%. The lowest proportion for
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a cafe
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cafes
Adelide
at just under 50%.Correct your spelling
Adelaide
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