The three pictures show the changes of a public building in Hartford between 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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below
ithestrate
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orchestrate
the
diferences
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differences
. f a public
buildina
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building
in Hartford
fom
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from
1985 to 2009. In 1995.
the
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Hanford Street
pass
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through the
ared
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area
from
horth
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north
to south. To the western side
the
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road, there was a garden and a hilding. Inside the
bilding
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building
: there was a
bublic
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public
reading room with a Kitchen in the -West comer Ten years later. the street
remain
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unchanged. The size
the
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garden became smaller,
whereas
the
brilding
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building
was enlargement. A meeting room was added in the northern part of the building, the puttie
readng
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reading
room was
repleed
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replaced
replied
by the reception. Morener, the direction of the kitchen changed from
honzontal
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horizontal
to vertical In 2005. the street still stayed in place The garden became the car park and the size of
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bilding
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building
increased
further
. The theatre occupies
mast
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of the
lilding
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building
lilting
its tho to the chairs in the theatre, there was
a
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stage
sections
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on both side The
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meeting
meating
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meeting
loom and reception had been removed, but the
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kitchen
lichen
litchen
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kitchen
remain
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unchanged East to the kitchen a hall was added
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