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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is true that many
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 vanish every year. There is an argument about that, and some individuals say that life would be easier if there are fewer
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 in the world. I completely disagree with
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 statement and I believe that
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 should be protected. In the following essay, the reasons will be discussed. On the one hand,
language
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 is one of the most important things that
people
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 can interact with. It is obvious that if there are a few
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 that
people
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 speak, the interaction between
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 and
people
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 might rise
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 because sometimes learning a new
language
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 is very difficult and
people
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 are not willing to learn a new
language
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 because it needs a lot of hard work and practice to learn so with a few
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people
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 do not have the challenge of learning a new
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.
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, if most
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 speak Persian, their collaboration with each other may get better because they understand their requirements very well.
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, I think
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 is not a strong reason for living easier.
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, the negative effects of diminishing
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 are irreversible.
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, there is a great historical and cultural background for some
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 like Persian,
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 if these
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 die out, some parts of the history of a country die out too.
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, for the tourism industry
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 is one of the most important attractions that
people
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 are willing to see.
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, many
people
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 travel to some
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 to see the way
people
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 talk to each other because of the intonation,
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 that
people
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 use. Thereby, we cannot underestimate the power of
language
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 to demonstrate the history, culture, and attraction
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countries
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. In conclusion, for some
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people
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 it is not important that many
languages
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 die out, and they think it would cause an easier life,
while
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 some
languages
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 have a strong historical and cultural background that with dyeing out those
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, valuable things will disappear. And I strongly disagree with
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 notion that life will be easier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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