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One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can now be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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 in the current situation of course would have benefits and drawbacks,
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 the occupation scarcity
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 the existence of
robots
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 or computers.
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, explanation of the advantages and
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disadvantages will be explained in the essay below. Day by day
technology
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 fastly increases,
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 is something that
people
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 or even firms cannot avoid since nowadays they need
technology
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such
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 as smartphones and computers in order to keep working on their responsibility.
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, a business company needs to have computers
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which it makes their employees work more comfortably in the office.
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, by having a comfortable situation in the workplace, the company would have a better performance in catching their profit.
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, the drawback
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 having improved
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 is that many
people
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 may lose opportunities to get jobs
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 the existence of
robots
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.
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Robots
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 able to do automation activities
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 as scanning, analyzing, and even driving.
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, because of these machines, some companies prefer to make a purchase in
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 rather than pay a monthly salary to
people
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.
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, toll road machines may be worked by
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 because the job is just to scan payments and it means they are able to replace
people
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.
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, there will be an increasing scarcity of jobs for job seekers. In conclusion, even though
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 has a very beneficial impact on humans,
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development must be slightly considered so that scarcity does not occur which is detrimental to humans themselves.
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, the advantages if overbalance the disadvantages.
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