The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates positive
assessment
about getting good Fix the agreement mistake
assessments
score
for different aspects of a university. For the teaching quality, electronic Fix the agreement mistake
scores
resources
and teaching quality are getting increased as the year go
by between 2000-2010, Change the verb form
goes
however
the range of modules decreased slightly as the year goes.
Add a comma
,however
According to
the chart in 2000, students gave good feedbacks
on print Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
resources
at 85% meanwhile the pupils give poor feedback on the range on
modules offered and electronic Change preposition
of
resources
at 32% and 45%.
As the years
go on, between 2000-2005 there was decrease
of 2 % Add an article
a decrease
for
teaching quality Change preposition
in
however
it went back to 69% in 2010. Also
, the electronic resources
increased a lot throughout the 10 years
like
shown in the bar above, the percentage in 2000 was 45% Change preposition
as
while
in 2010 was 85%. Subsequently
, the rate for buildings or facilities remain constant throughout the years
at 77%
In conclusion, there was improvement
Add an article
an improvement
for
some areas in the survey rates except the modules offered in all the Change preposition
in
years
that the survey took place.Submitted by lilinsia12 on
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