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some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion ielts essay

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Nowadays,
the
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capital
punishment
it
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is not use
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 as it was back in the
days
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,
however
, in some
countries
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 they still use
this
 method for justice. In
this
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 I will discuss why should capital
punishment
 be allowed or not.
Firstly
, capital
punishment
 should be
use
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 for vital
crimes
,
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and not regular
crimes
 that can be punished by jail,
although
 some
people
 may not deserve capital
punishment
.
For example
, a
person
 might be innocent and deserve a second chance,
while
 for other
people
 there is no excuse for their
crimes
 like murder or rape. That's why for
this
 type of
crimes
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 I consider that execution might bring peace to the victims or the family's victim.
Secondly
, a plethora of
people
, consider that capital
punishment
 can be a harsh sentence for the
person
's who are charged with
crimes
 and that they should deserve
life
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 sentence to death in
the
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prison,that way the
person
 who is being guilty can spend the rest of his
life
 regretting what he did and asking for forgiveness, eventually, maybe getting a second chance to
life
,
due to
 the fact that not everybody that commits
crimes
 is a horrible
person
,
however
, there are some bonders that should be respected.
For example
, a
person
 who caused a car accident,
he
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committed a crime, but
this
 should not mean that he would be capital
punishment
 for his actions. That's why some
people
 consider that capital
punishment
 should not be used. In my opinion, capital
punishment
 should be used just in major cases with
crimes
 that are unforgivable, and those
people
 who don't want a second chance to change their
life
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 good, even though in today's society
this
 method lost
his
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popularity, it is still an effective way to protect the community from criminals.
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