The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018.
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The pie charts compare the popularity of four modes of transportation: cars, busses, bicycles, and walking in Cambridge UK in 2008 and 2018.
Overall
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, in ten years, there was a significant drop in automobile usage, contrary to the popularity of cycling and walking, which had gradually risen by 2018.
To begin
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with, cars were the most popular means of transport in 2008 with 42% of the population choosing to use them.
Next,
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buses were in the second position with 30% of people in Cambridge loving the public transportation.
Furthermore
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, bicycles and walking were the least favourites, with only 17% and 11% respectively.
On the other hand
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, the automotive had decreased to more than half in just ten years.
Although
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cars still had around 20% of usage, they had been replaced by bikes as the most favoured in the city with a 13% increase to 30%.
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, walking had raised to a quarter, the same level busses had plunged into.
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