You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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At present, today's sedentary
life
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means no
time
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for people to spend
time
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for their own
families
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.
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, the tradition of
families
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getting together to eat has been disappearing by day by day. The major reason behind it is
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schedule of people they are having. I personally feel it is the main factor behind it. But there ate another explanation as well. In
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easy
I will explain all the causes concerning the event. In my opinion, I firmly believe that
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phenomenon has more negative sides compared to positive ones.
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with, the ritual of
families
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o get
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to eat meals is slowly fading away because children are often too impatient to eat at the table and parents sometimes allow them to have their meal in front of the TV or
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in front of the computer.
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, the close-knit family is disappearing in the face of economic pressure.
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, parents have to work to pay bills and provide for their
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.it is so common for to them arrived late at home meanwhile children have to go to school early
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they eat early and go to bed before even their parents go home. It has been reported in the magazine that only 30% of
families
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manage to eat together regularly.
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, when a family sits down together, it helps them handle the stresses of daily
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and
the hassles of day-to-day experience, but
due to
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the rapid adoption of
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practice family members are unable to share a bond with their loved ones.
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, Numerous studies show that eating together not only is an important aspect of family
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but helps make weight control easier.
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,
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are you
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and less likely to
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.
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, eating is a fundamentally rewarding behaviour, and is
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intrinsically linked to mood and emotions.so it is advisable to spend your meal
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with your dear ones. Where you can fully enjoy your meal.
To conclude
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, the phenomenon concerning the replacement of eating
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with family with eating alone in front of the screen is unacceptable. It is indeed hard to manage family
time
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in today's
life
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but individuals at least try to have 1-day meal with close family.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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