The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration depicts the phases of the chain of
food
production in the United States.
Overall
,
this
is a multi-stage man-made process which begins with the production of
food
in
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farms and ends
in
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with
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humans consuming it in different forms at their homes or restaurants. First of all, the
food
, including
cattle based
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cattle-based
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food
product
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products
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is produced at farms and industries and
then
it is sent for processing in industries. The processed
food
is
then
stored in stores before distributing them
further
for human consumption. The processed
food
is
subsequently
distributed to retail stores and restaurants, where it can be used for
further
reaching out
the
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consumers. From retail stores, people pick it for cooking at home
while
restaurants utilise it to serve the cuisines made using
this
food
item to their customers.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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