The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the phases of the chain of
food
production in the United States.
Overall
, this
is a multi-stage man-made process which begins with the production of food
in
farms and ends Change preposition
on
in
humans consuming it in different forms at their homes or restaurants.
First of all, the Change preposition
with
food
, including cattle based
Add a hyphen
cattle-based
food
product
is produced at farms and industries and Fix the agreement mistake
products
then
it is sent for processing in industries. The processed food
is then
stored in stores before distributing them further
for human consumption.
The processed food
is subsequently
distributed to retail stores and restaurants, where it can be used for further
reaching out the
consumers. From retail stores, people pick it for cooking at home Change preposition
to the
while
restaurants utilise it to serve the cuisines made using this
food
item to their customers.Submitted by ravleenkaurchawla on
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