You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the average number of
visitors
entering a museum
in summer and winter in 2003. There are three types of museums that are British Museum
, science
Correct article usage
the science
museum
and natural
history Correct article usage
the natural
museum
.
In
the Change preposition
At
starting
of June 600 Replace the word
start
thousand
visitors
came to visit British
Correct article usage
the British
museum
and after Capitalize word
Museum
that
there has been rapid growth in the Add a comma
,that
month
of July that
is approximately more than 700 Correct pronoun usage
apply
thousand
people. In the month
of august
, Capitalize word
August
visitors
have declined significantly by 500 thousand
individuals and then
again increased slowly in September by approximately 650 thousand
. Natural history museum
had reached around 550 thousand
visitors
. Then
slowly decreased in the month
of July by less than 400 thousand
and it has
remained in the Unnecessary verb
apply
month
of August. But a slowly
growth has been seen in September by less than 500 Change the adverb
slow
thousand
. 400 thousand
people visited science
Correct article usage
the science
museum
in the month
of June and it has almost remained at
constant till the Change preposition
apply
month
of July but, after that
it Add a comma
,that
has
declined a little in the Unnecessary verb
apply
month
of August by 300 thousand
visitors
. In September it has shown an increase in visitors
by approximately reaching 500 thousand
.
In conclusion, British museums and natural history museum
had to face a lot of ups and downs but science Fix the agreement mistake
museums
museum
Fix the agreement mistake
museums
had
almost remained Unnecessary verb
apply
at
Change preposition
apply
constant
.Add an article
a constant
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, museum, thousand, month with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 3 times.
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