The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph illustrates the average number of

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entering a

museum

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in summer and winter in 2003. There are three types of museums that are British

Museum

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,

science

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museum

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and

natural

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the natural

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history

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.

In

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the

starting

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of June 600

thousand

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visitors

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came to visit

British

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the British

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museum

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and after

that

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there has been rapid growth in the

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of July

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that

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is approximately more than 700

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people. In the

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of

august

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,

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have declined significantly by 500

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individuals and

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again increased slowly in September by approximately 650

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. Natural history

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had reached around 550

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visitors

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.

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slowly decreased in the

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of July by less than 400

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and it

has

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remained in the

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of August. But a

slowly

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growth has been seen in September by less than 500

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. 400

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people visited

science

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the science

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museum

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in the

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of June and it has almost remained

at

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apply

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constant till the

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of July but, after

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it

has

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declined a little in the

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of August by 300

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visitors

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. In September it has shown an increase in

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by approximately reaching 500

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. In conclusion, British museums and natural history

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museum

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museums

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had to face a lot of ups and downs but science

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museum

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museums

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had

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almost remained

at

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constant

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a constant

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