The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.
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The line graphs show temperature and the bar chart revenue from bathing suit sales in new york city during the first months of the year 2012. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that April is when more money is made from selling swimsuits and the more people buy swimsuits in winter and spring. As illustrated in the line graphs the temperature increases over the
last
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five of six months with the peak in June, the temperature until 65 degrees.
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, the bar chart demonstrated that the revenue tends to decrease during the peak of the summer.
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, we can see that the sales of swimsuits grow up in the winter and spring, and the numbers started to rise in February. From February to March the amount went from 150 to approximately 200 dollars and in April reach a peak of 250.
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, is possible to see that the numbers of purchases drastically fall in June.
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