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The chart below shows how frequently people in the us are in fast food restaurants between year 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the us are in fast food restaurants between year 2003 and 2013.
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The bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating
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, by the people of the United States in different restaurants during three different years(2003,2006 and 2013).
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, it can be clearly seen that the majority of the population visited the
food
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 restaurants once a
week
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 only. People who are every day and who never went to eat outside were observed around 5%. In terms of
once a
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week
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 visits, individuals in the US hit the highest number in the
year
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 2006 at 40%,
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 approximately 32% and 28% went to eat fast
food
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 in the
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year
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years
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2003 and 2013 respectively.
Secondly
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, those who went to the
food
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 shops several times a
week
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 and those who visited once or twice a month showed
closer
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 pattern for the
year
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 2013 as nearly 15%.
However
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, in the
year
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 2003,
eating
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 several
time
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times
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 a
week
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 earn more proportion than those who ate once or twice a month by 20% and 15% respectively.
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, only a few purchased fast
foods
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food
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every day. The number started at 4% in 2003, which
then
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 decreased to around 3% in the
year
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 2006 and 2012.
Furthermore
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, those who had never eaten junk
food
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also
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 accounted
about
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at
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5% of the total population. During 2003 it was 5%, but later it hold a steady number at 4% in the
year
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 2006 and 2013.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, week, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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