The chart below shows how frequently people in the us are in fast food restaurants between year 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the us are in fast food restaurants between year 2003 and 2013.
The bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating
trend
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, by the people of the United States in different restaurants during three different years(2003,2006 and 2013).
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the majority of the population visited the
food
restaurants once a
week
only. People who are every day and who never went to eat outside were observed around 5%. In terms of
once a
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week
visits, individuals in the US hit the highest number in the
year
2006 at 40%,
whereas
approximately 32% and 28% went to eat fast
food
in the
year
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years
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2003 and 2013 respectively.
Secondly
, those who went to the
food
shops several times a
week
and those who visited once or twice a month showed
closer
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pattern for the
year
2013 as nearly 15%.
However
, in the
year
2003,
eating
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several
time
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a
week
earn more proportion than those who ate once or twice a month by 20% and 15% respectively.
On the other hand
, only a few purchased fast
foods
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every day. The number started at 4% in 2003, which
then
decreased to around 3% in the
year
2006 and 2012.
Furthermore
, those who had never eaten junk
food
also
accounted
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5% of the total population. During 2003 it was 5%, but later it hold a steady number at 4% in the
year
2006 and 2013.
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