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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

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Nowadays, it is common for people to depart from their own country and to live or study in another. Some might say it is inspiring, the others might say it is challenging.
This
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 and the disadvantages of
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 particular decision.
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 with, one of the greatest
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 for most travellers is homesickness. Being unable to see their family and close
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 in person may intensify a sense of loneliness, and sometimes sadness.
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, there are some changes in their lifestyle that can be expected
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 they are in foreign lands.
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, many backpackers in Australia need to adopt bulk buying of groceries, as the public transport and business hour of shops are not as convenient as in their own countries.
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, living or studying abroad can be inspirational. Being alone in a foreign land pushes people out of their comfort zone to meet
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 for companionship.
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, international students in Australia support each other through online platforms
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 and sometimes organise gatherings to meet and to share food together.
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, travellers learn to adapt and to experience daily life in a new cultural perspective,
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, it helps them to make more educated decisions in the future. In conclusion, disadvantages
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 as feeling lonely
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 missing family and
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 and lifestyle changes can appeal to in abroad experience.
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, there are
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 like gaining new
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 and
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 that would bring positive influences in one's future.
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 the experience can vary for each person, the
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 of living or studying abroad outweighed the disadvantages,
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 it is recommended.

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