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Nowadays individual take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on individual and on his/her family?

#business #trip
Business
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A business
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trip
 is where an individual is assigned for
a travel
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travel
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 to either internationally or domestically for work purposes. Many bachelor or bachelorette employees will choose to go for a
business
trip
 compare to married employees
due to
 them having one less responsibility of taking care of
childrens
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children
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.
However
, there are some married employees that are being sent for
a
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a business trip
business trips
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business
 trips
will
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that will
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 bring along their family
members
. And in
this
discussion
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,discussion
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 I will write about the advantages and disadvantages of
business
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a business
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trip
on
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for
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individual
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an individual
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 and on his/her
fmaily
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family
. The advantage of bringing along family
members
to
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on
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 a
business
trip
 will make an individual feels more comfortable as if they are back at home and reduce stress built up in them
while
 working away from
its
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their
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 comfort zone.
For instance
, when an individual comes home to a hot meal after a day of tiring work,
this
 will
defnitely
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definitely
 help his/her fatigue and one less problem to decide a meal to cook or purchase.
However
, the disadvantage of bringing along family
members
to
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on
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 a
business
trip
 is cost. If an individual income is on the lower end, having family
members
 following
to
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a
business
trip
 might be a burden as there are more mouths to feed.
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, an individual
only
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who only
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need
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 to pay for two meals a day will now pay for at least four meals a day which will put him/her into more problems. In conclusion, bringing along family
members
 to a
business
trip
 might be good for your mental health but at the cost of savings.
Therefore
, an individual should write out a plan and cost estimate before deciding on bringing family along
to
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 a
business
trip
 to prevent unnecessary losses.
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