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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Teaching is one of the most noble professions all over the world. It is argued some people that having new teachers every year will be beneficial for students
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 others are of the opinion that an experienced tutor will be much more advantageous for them.
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 changing teachers each year has some positives like new learning methods, I believe an experienced tutor can help tutee in their personal growth
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 academic result.
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 with, frequently changing a lecturer every year means that pupils get to experience new learning methods.
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, Pupils may find some interest in different ways of teaching that will make them more intrigued by their lessons,
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, they will never feel bored.
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, An experienced teacher may share more generic examples to tutees which do not appeal to them anymore
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 the new educator may share personal experiences that may appeal to students a lot.
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, A seasoned educator knows his pupils a lot better which enables him to support them in their personal growth. He
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 knows their parents because of
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 long-term role which makes him the ideal person to guide them on their personal issues.
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, the academic results of the tutee may improve as the lecturer knows the good and bad performing tutees,
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, can guide them
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 their talent.
As a result
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, they will do much better in their academic exams. In Conclusion, even though having a new tutor can be somewhat beneficial for learners to get to know new methods of learning but a teacher who spent a long time with the students has the visibility to ameliorate them not only in personal growth but
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 in academic results.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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