The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The chart illustrates the township of Garlsdon with a population of 65000. A new supermarket mentioned as ‘S’ is planned for the municipality. The map gives information about two possible areas for the supermarket.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that most of the areas are housing and countryside.
Then
there are two industrial sectors: on the north side and south side.
Also
a centre of the town without traffic zones nearer to the southern industrial region.
According to
the map, the new supermarket is going to be built in the countryside or in the town centre of the town. It is interesting to note that there are three main roadways which go into several towns smaller than Carlson. The first township is 25 kilometres away named Cransdon with 29000 people. The second is 16 kilometres away named Bransdon with 15000 people. The third one is the nearest village named Hindon with a 10000 population.
In addition
, there is the railway which goes through the housings and municipality centre.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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