The chart below shows purchase levels of four meats in the UK from 1974 to 2011.

The chart below shows purchase levels of four meats in the UK from 1974 to 2011.
The line graph illustrates how much meat (
beef
,
lamb
,
chicken
and
pork
) British people bought between 1974 and 2011. Units are measured in grams per person per day.
Overall
, the most striking feature is that over the period there was a decline in the consumption levels of all types of meat, with the exception of
chicken
.
Also
,
while
beef
was the most popular meat in 1974, it was
then
overtaken by
chicken
in 1997.
In addition
, the consumption of
pork
and
lamb
roughly halved over 35 years.
Beef
and
chicken
were purchased the most in 1974,
however
,
while
beef
stood at just under 200g, hit a peak in the 1980s and started to plummet,
chicken
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was at just over 100g and had increased to roughly 175g by 1997, overtaking
beef
the same year.
Moreover
,
while
beef
continued to drop, hit a trough in the 2000s and
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recovered by 2011 to amount to the level of
chicken
in 1974,
chicken
fluctuated in the 2000s and increased slightly to reverse positions with
beef
by the end of the period.
Pork
and
lamb
were consumed the least.
Nonetheless
,
lamb
stood at roughly the same level as
chicken
in 1974 and
pork
was just under 100g. Following the same pattern as
beef
,
lamb
and
pork
rose slightly in the 1980s and
then
underwent a decrease,
however
,
lamb
saw a more steep decline than
pork
, which amounted to just over 50g in 2011, and had reached just under 50g by 2011.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, lamb, chicken, pork, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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