Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requiremnet. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
A sector of the population opines that garbage from home
are
not Change the verb form
is
engough
Correct your spelling
enough
reusing
. So they need Wrong verb form
reused
involvement
of Add an article
the involvement
government
to make it Correct article usage
the government
mendatory
. I firmly advocate Correct your spelling
mandatory
reuse
of wastages and interruption of law as Correct article usage
the reuse
this
will help us to make our environment clean, and economical
stronger. Change the adjective
economically
Whereas
by
not doing reuse of Change preposition
apply
wastage
block Replace the word
waste
drainage
Correct article usage
the drainage
sysytem
and will make Correct your spelling
system
unhealthy
nature.
Everyone likes to see, and enjoy beautiful Correct pronoun usage
it unhealthy
scenario
. Beauty always does not come from Fix the agreement mistake
scenarios
creator
or naturally. Correct article usage
the creator
People
have to obey few
rules to keep it gorgeous. If there is no law society Correct article usage
a few
are
not bound to Correct subject-verb agreement
is
do
reuse Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
their
Correct pronoun usage
its
wastage
. Replace the word
waste
However
, if nation
Correct article usage
the nation
do
that it will not only Change the verb form
does
helps
to make nature clean and Change the verb form
help
tide
but Correct your spelling
tidy
also
it
involves economic success. Entrepreneurs can make handy crafts from industrial Correct pronoun usage
apply
watage
. Correct your spelling
wastage
wattage
Eventhough
some individuals are creating Correct your spelling
Even though
nature friendly
Add a hyphen
nature-friendly
bag
, juice Fix the agreement mistake
bags
packet
etc.
My auntie, namely, Fix the agreement mistake
packets
she
was just a Correct pronoun usage
apply
home maker
before she start her new innovative Correct your spelling
homemaker
environment supported
firm. She was like other Add a hyphen
environment-supported
people
who do not recycle their dirty things. One day she started making clothes from plastics. Breakthrough
idea changed her Add an article
The breakthrough
life style
. Now she is Correct your spelling
lifestyle
self sufficient
and Add a hyphen
self-sufficient
paying
Wrong verb form
pays
tax
every year to the nation.
On the other contrast, if Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
a
citizens do not Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
use
their garbage anymore it will make unhealthy
and Correct article usage
an unhealthy
stincky
society. Which will not only Correct your spelling
stinky
sticky
effect
Correct your spelling
affect
current
generation but Correct article usage
the current
also
next
well-being. Correct article usage
the next
For instance
, polythin
. As it has no other Correct your spelling
polythene
use
in further
so people
throw this
here and there after use
of it. It block
our drainage system. During Change the verb form
blocks
the
heavy Correct article usage
apply
rain water
can not go to Correct your spelling
rainwater
Correct article usage
the swerage
swerage
system because of Correct your spelling
sewerage
storage
this
. That create
Change the verb form
creates
flood
, water blockage in Add an article
a flood
different
area. Add an article
a different
People
can not move. Although
in life and death
situation ambulance stay in one place.
After all above the discussions, I strongly believe that Add a hyphen
life-and-death
this
aw
Correct your spelling
law
enforement
should be imperative to recycle Correct your spelling
enforcement
use
of our wastage
. Other than that it will be detrimental for our lives and society as well.Replace the word
waste
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