The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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There are both significant and extended changes that are made between the two layouts. The first major change that can be seen is the addition of two roads from the
round about
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headed
north west
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and north. On the north
side
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a bridge is added so that cars can cross over the river to reach the planned housing area.
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on the south
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another
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is added to connect the road.
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, a total of six housing
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are planned to be added
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both
west
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and east
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with each having a total of three housing
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.
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, to
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support the needs of the residents public
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structures
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such
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as
school
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schools
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,
playground
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playgrounds
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, shops and medical
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are added to the town's construction plan.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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