The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
There are both significant and extended changes that are made between the two layouts.
The first major change that can be seen is the addition of two roads from the
round about
headed Correct your spelling
roundabout
north west
and north. On the north Correct your spelling
northwest
side
a bridge is added so that cars can cross over the river to reach the planned housing area. Add a comma
,side
while
on the south Linking Words
side
another Add a comma
,side
round about
is added to connect the road.
Correct your spelling
roundabout
Secondly
, a total of six housing Linking Words
space
are planned to be added Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
on
both Change preposition
in
west
and east Correct article usage
the west
area
with each having a total of three housing Fix the agreement mistake
areas
space
.
Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
Lastly
, to Linking Words
further
support the needs of the residents public Linking Words
structure
Fix the agreement mistake
structures
such
as Linking Words
school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
playground
, shops and medical Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
centre
are added to the town's construction plan.Fix the agreement mistake
centres
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