The line graph below compares the number of British people commuting to work by car, bus or train everyday from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph below compares the number of British people commuting to work by
car
, bus
or train
everyday
from 1970 to 2030.
Replace the word
every day
Overall
, the proportion of car
and bus
commuters has witnessed an upward trend while
this
figure for bus
has experienced a slight drop Fix the agreement mistake
buses
at the end
of the period. It is clear that
car
travelers
have accounted for the highest number throughout the years.
In 1970, citizens Change the spelling
travellers
traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
car
began at nearly five million
which is followed by bus
and train
passengers at around four and two million
respectively. In the next 44 years, in 2014, the proportion of UK people driving to work observed a constant growth after leveling
out at seven Change the spelling
levelling
million
. While
the number of residents going to work by train
increased significantly, the reverse pattern was seen in bus
users.
By 2030, it is anticipated that car
drivers will reach the
peak of nine Correct article usage
a
million
and this
figure for train
is foreseen to continue climbing considerably to approximately 4.5 Fix the agreement mistake
trains
million
. In contrast
, the use of bus
is predicted to decline gradually to about 3 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
million
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