This graph displays the number of daily United Kingdom travelers by car, bus or train over the period of 60 years from 1970

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of daily United Kingdom

travelers

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by

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,

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or

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train

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over the period of 60 years from 1970. It is

clearly

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that the

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of

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and

train

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users

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have

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increased gradually,

meanwhile

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the

train

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users

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have felt

steadily

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. In 1970, there

was

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around 5

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UK commuters

traveling

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by

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,

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the

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and

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users

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were 4

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and 2

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people respectively. In the next 44 years, the

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of commuters

traveling

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by

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daily rose gradually to over 7

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and the

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of commuting rail passengers increased slightly to over 3

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.

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, the

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bus

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users

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decreased slightly by 0.5

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( from 4

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to 3.5

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). By 2030, the

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of people who

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a car

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car

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is predicted to reach 9

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, the

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of

train

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users

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is expected nearly 5

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,

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, the

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of

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users

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is anticipated to become

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less popular with 3

million

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users

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.