This graph displays the number of daily United Kingdom travelers by car, bus or train over the period of 60 years from 1970

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graph displays the

number

of daily United Kingdom

travelers

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travellers

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by

car

,

bus

or

train

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trains

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over the period of 60 years from 1970. It is

clearly

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that the

number

of

car

and

train

users

have

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increased gradually,

meanwhile

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the

train

users

have felt

steadily

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. In 1970, there

was

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around 5

million

UK commuters

traveling

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by

car

,

while

the

car

and

bus

users

were 4

million

and 2

million

people respectively. In the next 44 years, the

number

of commuters

traveling

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by

car

daily rose gradually to over 7

million

and the

number

of commuting rail passengers increased slightly to over 3

million

.

However

, the

bus

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users

decreased slightly by 0.5

million

( from 4

million

to 3.5

million

). By 2030, the

number

of people who

driving

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a car

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car

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is predicted to reach 9

million

, the

number

of

train

users

is expected nearly 5

million

,

whereas

, the

number

of

bus

users

is anticipated to become

a

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less popular with 3

million

users

.