It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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would outweigh the

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taking risks

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both personal and professional lives. I personally believe that there is more

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than that of

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disadvantage

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. The most noticeable

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is that the individual can gain new and beneficial

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and knowledge that they may use in both their personal and professional lives. It is

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the fact that each people have their own way

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dealing with a certain situation and that by experiencing something new, they would be able to integrate the information in some scenarios that may help them overcome obstacles that

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the potential to delay or disrupt their activities. Another

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is that

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the individual can go out of their comfort zone. By stepping out of their comfort zone, they can acquire the ability to be creative. In

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times, creativity and innovation

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society. Meaning that the more they are able to think outside the box, the bigger opportunity they may receive from certain institutions.

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as corporate

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, science

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or even engineering

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.

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, a choice of action will always have a

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in it. The common

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for a professional

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is losing a job. It is because the individual will carry their company’s name when conducting certain activities.

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have to face public

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when they make a mistake from taking the

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.

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, in their personal

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their future can be at stake. If a person decides to take

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for what they think is best for them without consulting with anyone, often time it would not end well. In some

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they would conduct felony, crime or even

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actions that can cost their public moral image.

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would result in them

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able to get accepted in

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society well.

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my statement, I personally believe that it is important for people to take risks in both

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and professional lives because the

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outweighs the

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. With the

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able to be creative, attaining experience and knowledge that are useful and enhancing the ability to be creative.

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the

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of

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and public morale.