The first chart below shows how energy is used in an Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse  gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information  by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart illustrates six different energies which are used in Australian households. The second one shows consumption of the
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gas
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which results from
this
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energy
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use.
Overall
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, most
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that is
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used in Australian houses is heating and
water
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heating.
However
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, the most proportion of
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gasses is from
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heating and other appliances. About half of the household
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includes
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heating, other appliances, and refrigeration with 30%, 15%, and 7% respectively.
Water
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heating
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gas
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produces the same amount of that
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is
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used,
while
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refrigeration produces double the
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gas
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in comparison with usage. Other appliances emit about one-third of
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gas
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. Another half of the
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cover heating, cooling, and lighting. Among them, heating has the most proportion with 42%. But heating
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emissions is about 15%. Cooling usage is about 2% and emissions are the same. Lighting has a 4% share,
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the emissions are doubled.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gas, energy, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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