The first chart below shows how energy is used in an Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart illustrates six different energies which are used in Australian households. The second one shows consumption of the
greenhouse
gas
which results from this
energy
use.
Overall
, most energy
that is
used in Australian houses is heating and water
heating. However
, the most proportion of greenhouse
gasses is from water
heating and other appliances.
About half of the household energy
includes water
heating, other appliances, and refrigeration with 30%, 15%, and 7% respectively. Water
heating greenhouse
gas
produces the same amount of that energy
is
used, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
refrigeration produces double the greenhouse
gas
in comparison with usage. Other appliances emit about one-third of greenhouse
gas
.
Another half of the energy
cover heating, cooling, and lighting. Among them, heating has the most proportion with 42%. But heating greenhouse
gas
emissions is about 15%. Cooling usage is about 2% and emissions are the same. Lighting has a 4% share, whereas
the emissions are doubled.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gas, energy, water with synonyms.
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