Some people say the professional workers such as, doctors, nurses and teachers, who make greater contribution to the society, should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree and disagree?.

Despite the
amount
of time that professionals spent on their studies, The number of their's salaries are considerably low compared to actresses and athletes. The
amount
of money that these
people
obtain can reach an unimaginable number.
Hence
I have to agree with the statement. Nowadays,
people
appreciate their role models more compare to social
workers
.
For example
, during Covid pandemic, a lot of
people
decided not to wear a mask since several public figures were encouraged to do so. Their voices are heard more.
This
is probably
due to
the number of fans and followers that exist.
On the other hand
, professional
workers
often have a limited
amount
of audience for them,
hence
the impact is lacking. Because of that, business owners and many other
people
are more willing to pay a big
amount
of money to public figures compare to professional
workers
, since it will bring a greater impact.
This
behaviour is actually the one which brings a big gap in salaries. As professional
workers
often work under the government, they are forced to live at a fixed rate
that is
given.
For example
, the salary of nurses and general practitioners are mostly at minimal wages. Yet actresses can set their prices freely. In conclusion, I agree that there is a large gap between professional
workers
' and public figures' salaries, and it is
due to
the level of impact
along with
the limitations that happen in these two careers.
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