The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph below shows the number of
visitors
per Use synonyms
month
in the summer of 2013 in three different Use synonyms
museums
. We can find out that the number of Use synonyms
visitors
is different respectively every Use synonyms
month
, and the average number of Use synonyms
visitors
is the highest in the British Use synonyms
Museum
.
First of all, it is obvious to say that the British Use synonyms
Museum
has the highest Use synonyms
rate
of Use synonyms
visitors
among all of the Use synonyms
museums
. Except for August, more than 500 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
visitors
visited. Especially compared to other Use synonyms
museums
, July was the Use synonyms
month
when the visitor Use synonyms
rate
was the highest. As we can see, Science Use synonyms
Museum
and Natural History Use synonyms
Museum
have the lowest Use synonyms
rate
of Use synonyms
visitors
in July.
The interesting fact is that Use synonyms
while
the British Linking Words
Museum
's Use synonyms
rate
is higher than 500 Use synonyms
thousand
every Use synonyms
month
, the Science Use synonyms
Museum
and the Natural History Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Museum
Change noun form
Museum's
rate
is never higher than 600 Use synonyms
thousand
. Especially, the Science Use synonyms
Museum
has the lowest Use synonyms
rate
compared to all of the Use synonyms
museums
, which is not higher than 400 Use synonyms
thousand
. But, one thing in common for all of the Use synonyms
musuems
is that the visitor rates in September Correct your spelling
museums
is
increased than those in August.Change the verb form
are
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