You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph below shows the number of

visitors

per

month

in the summer of 2013 in three different

museums

. We can find out that the number of

visitors

is different respectively every

month

, and the average number of

visitors

is the highest in the British

Museum

. First of all, it is obvious to say that the British

Museum

has the highest

rate

of

visitors

among all of the

museums

. Except for August, more than 500

thousand

visitors

visited. Especially compared to other

museums

, July was the

month

when the visitor

rate

was the highest. As we can see, Science

Museum

and Natural History

Museum

have the lowest

rate

of

visitors

in July. The interesting fact is that

while

the British

Museum

's

rate

is higher than 500

thousand

every

month

, the Science

Museum

and the Natural History

Museum

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rate

is never higher than 600

thousand

. Especially, the Science

Museum

has the lowest

rate

compared to all of the

museums

, which is not higher than 400

thousand

. But, one thing in common for all of the

musuems

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museums

is that the visitor rates in September

is

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increased than those in August.