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Some people argue that it is important for individuals and communities to recycle their waste, while others believe it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Recycling is one of the controversial issues we have nowadays. There are some
people
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 who believe that recycling should be important for individuals
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 others think that the government should take
responsibility
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 for recycling. In the following essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and elaborate on the reasons why I believe both statements are true.
Initially
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, some communities opine that
governments
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 have the biggest
responsibility
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 when it comes to recycling. As
people
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 think recycling should be regulated by law,
governments
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 must provide relevant legislation for recycling.
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, authorities should have the
responsibility
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 of building recycling centres for cities and towns.
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, to be able to separate house waste councils should provide suitable equipment for homes.
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,
people
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 cannot divide and convert their household waste without sufficient collection bins or recycling centres.
On the other hand
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, there are some other
people
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 who think that recycling should be important for individuals and
people
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 should take more
responsibility
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.
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, some think that without any personal effort,
governments
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 alone cannot make a significant change for our future generations.
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, they believe the public should learn how they suppose to recycle properly to save the next generation. Even though councils supply the necessary equipment, if
people
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 don`t take any action to recycle their waste no one can get effective results. In conclusion,
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 there are some
people
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 who think that
governments
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 must take all the
responsibility
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 for recycling, there are others
also
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 who believe that a person`s attitude has a big impact to achieve a meaningful end. In my opinion, both the government and individuals should take
responsibility
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 on
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 subject because without any cooperation it is impossible to clear our world. We all have to contribute to the process but
also
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 our
governments
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 should take measures to protect our environment.
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