Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: •give details of how you and your friends or family use the center •explain why the sports leisure center is important for the local community •describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
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Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter regarding a matter which concerns me significantly,that is
the closure of the sports and leisure centre.Firstly
,the amenities here have immensely helped us in improving our fitness and physique.Moreover
,my parents are fond of its eminent yoga classes.Lastly
, its sports activities allowed us to develop essential aptitudes which are imperative for representing our city in national competitions.
Evidently,it holds an important place in our hearts.It has not only motivated people to participate in diverse activities but also
has established brotherhood among them,subsequently
,it has indulged unity in us.Furthermore
,it provides us with an opportunity to relax and forget about our hectic work schedule.
However
,if it is shut down,it will have drastic effects on the society.It will not only affect our fitness goals but also
will deter us from meeting each other regularly.Nevertheless
,our avid youngsters will struggle to enhance their skills and will lose motivation.
Thank you in anticipation
Your's Faithfully
Ahmad Hassan NadeemSubmitted by kaswaahmed20 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite