The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The bar chart illustrates which activities are most popular among kids in Australia.

Overall

it can be seen that children that watch Television and videos are the most common.

While

Skateboarding and rollerblading are the most rare in both genders.

To begin

with, for the boys, there are three activities that stand out. The first one is watching TV and videos which show 100 per cent. Electronic or computer games come in second place with a percentage of 80.

Last

but not least, Bike Riding has the least percentage of 75. As for the Girl's group, unlike the boy's group, there are two activities that stick out.

Similarly

, The girl's group

also

has a 100 per cent in watching Tv and videos.

Finally

, arts and crafts are much more common in girls than boys with a percentage of 58.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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