The two pie charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010

#writing #Task1 #piechart Answer The two pie charts compare four categories of Canadian shopping online(electronics and appliances, food and beverage, home furnishing and video games) over a period of 5 years. Units are measured in percentages. It is noticeable that the

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of electronics and appliances experience a considerable fall over the 5years period,

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figure for food and beverage saw a big rise. In 2005, 35 % of the average Canadian went on electronics and appliances, which was the largest pie chart,

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by 2010,

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rate had fallen by 5 %. During a half-decade, the demand for home furnishing by Canadian consumers experienced a 5% decrease from a quarter to less than a fifth.

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in terms of food and beverage the

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of shopping in the category made up 22 per cent in 2005, after 5 years

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figure saw a significant rise of 32 per cent making it the largest retail suitor of all. In Canada the smallest

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selling retail belongest to video games in 2010 there was a 5 per cent rise from 18% to 23% in the category. By overtaking the

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of home furnishings.