Developments in technology are causing many environmental problems. Some people think that people should choose a simpler way of life. Others think that we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Technology
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has developed
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speed in recent years. Honestly, it really affects the environment and causes some
pollution
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problems. Like electricity litter and some dirty water
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the river. But
technology
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truly changes our lives. In recent years, most
people
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have advised the government that
people
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should go back to nature, and just a similar traditional life. They keep a few rules, put your phone,
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give up your TV, drive a car, go back to your feet, just walk, and close
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, go to the forest. I agree with these suggestions. We live in a society
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so complex. And we need to relax our spirit. But even though we can go back to the simple lifestyle without any
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in our life,
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technology
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developed has never stopped in the world. So it can’t be to solve the
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, we still live in an environmental
pollution
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world. Many countries and places have been changed with their environment by the new
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.
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, Beijing is a large modern city in the world. But before 2015, there was air
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in all years and most of the time, it happened in summer and winter. So most
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see the blue sky only a few days per year. Following the new
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development, the Chinese government found a way and solved
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problem
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.
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, if you visit Beijing now, the air
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has gone and the blue sky with you every day. So, in my view, the
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is not from technological development,
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and governments should solve
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problem
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, and
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learn how to protect our environment.
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the right way.
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