The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph depicts the total
temperatures
in three divided cities per month, calculated by units of Celsius
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are similar trends in the changes in temperature in Dubai and Sydney. Both burghs temperature shows upward trends from January to August, then
dramatic falls from September onwards. Sydney’s climate illustrates quite the opposite competency, as it goes down during the same period, then
sharply rises from late October and forwards.
As is represented, in Paris, the heat
ranges from the lowest at 5 degrees
Celsius
in January to the highest at 20 degrees
Celsius
in July and August, showing a rocket shift from the beginning of the year to late August. Interestingly, there are no changes in temperatures
in Paris during mid-autumn, remaining at 20 degrees
Celsius
. After September each year, the heat
falls fast to the minimum point, of 5 degrees
Celsius
.
Regarding the levels of temperatures
in Dubai, the condition in this
city is much higher than in the other towns. Ranging from the lowest at about 17 degrees
Celsius
in early spring to the peak at over 35 degrees
Celsius
, Dubai’s climate dramatically rises from January to August. Then
, it declines stunningly from September and so far, reaching the lowest position at over 20 degrees
Celsius
.
At the same time, in Sydney, the heat
changes show different competencies in contrast
to Paris and Dubai. There is a rise in temperatures
from the first month of the year till the start of July (from nearly 25 degrees
Celsius
to about 13 degrees
Celsius
). After that, the heat
decreases from late August to the annual end.Submitted by lengocuyenphuong0107 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, celsius, heat, degrees with synonyms.
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