It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Nurturing

children

to distinguish the

difference

between

right

and wrong from an early age is crucial. One

way

that aids them to learn

this

difference

is

punishment

. I completely disagree with

this

statement. And I think

punishment

has some negative effects on

children

,

while

parents

and

teachers

can use other ways to teach

this

behaviour. Teaching the

difference

between

right

and wrong is very critical. But using

punishment

to learn

this

behaviour has some disadvantages,

in other

words

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it might have some bad effects on

children

.

Firstly

, if

children

are punished for what they have done in a wrong

way

, they may lose their confidence to explore new experiments because they are afraid to be punished. So, in the long

term

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they may be isolated and get depression.

Secondly

, they may learn to lie to their

parents

or

teachers

for what they do.

For example

, if they break something accidentally, they may hide it or not tell their

parents

or lie to them about what they have done. There are some methods that

parents

and

teachers

can do when

children

do something wrong. One

way

that it might help is

punishment

. But it has some drawbacks. Another

way

is talking to

children

effectively. Before anything happens

parents

and

teachers

should predict some behavior and teach

children

how to behave in a good

way

. If

children

do something bad,

parents

and

teachers

should talk to them personally and say why that behaviour they have done is wrong and show the

right

way

.

This

method may boost

children

’s confidence because they know they may not be punished for what they do, and try to tell everything to their

parents

and

teachers

. In conclusion, teaching

right

and wrong to

children

from an early age is very important.

Punishment

is a

way

that helps them learn

this

difference

. In my point of

view

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I disagree with

this

opinion because

punishment

has bad effects on

children

like dishonesty, loss of confidence, isolation and depression.

However

, there are other methods for teaching like talking to them and explaining why some behaviours are wrong and what is the

right

way

.