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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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Nurturing
children
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 to distinguish the
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 between
right
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 and wrong from an early age is crucial. One
way
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 that aids them to learn
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difference
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 is
punishment
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. I completely disagree with
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 statement. And I think
punishment
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 has some negative effects on
children
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,
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parents
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 and
teachers
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 can use other ways to teach
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 behaviour. Teaching the
difference
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 between
right
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 and wrong is very critical. But using
punishment
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 to learn
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 behaviour has some disadvantages,
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 it might have some bad effects on
children
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.
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, if
children
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 are punished for what they have done in a wrong
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, they may lose their confidence to explore new experiments because they are afraid to be punished. So, in the long
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 they may be isolated and get depression.
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, they may learn to lie to their
parents
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 or
teachers
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 for what they do.
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, if they break something accidentally, they may hide it or not tell their
parents
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 or lie to them about what they have done. There are some methods that
parents
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 and
teachers
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 can do when
children
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 do something wrong. One
way
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 that it might help is
punishment
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. But it has some drawbacks. Another
way
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 is talking to
children
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 effectively. Before anything happens
parents
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 and
teachers
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 should predict some behavior and teach
children
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 how to behave in a good
way
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. If
children
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 do something bad,
parents
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 and
teachers
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 should talk to them personally and say why that behaviour they have done is wrong and show the
right
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way
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.
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 method may boost
children
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’s confidence because they know they may not be punished for what they do, and try to tell everything to their
parents
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 and
teachers
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. In conclusion, teaching
right
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 and wrong to
children
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 from an early age is very important.
Punishment
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 is a
way
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 that helps them learn
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difference
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. In my point of
view
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 I disagree with
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 opinion because
punishment
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 has bad effects on
children
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 like dishonesty, loss of confidence, isolation and depression.
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, there are other methods for teaching like talking to them and explaining why some behaviours are wrong and what is the
right
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way
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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